Wednesday, October 31, 2007

My Smile

Smile, like candies, can sweeten your heart.

Nurse, like an angel, guards patients with their needs.

School, like the society, has great competition.

Poems, like flowers, can be appreciated, smelled and tasted.

2 comments:

Angel said...

The title is My Simile-____-
not 'smile'
typing mistake
in fact, how can I edit the post

I'm writin' it said...

Nice poem and similes! It's wonderful that you love writing poems. Keep writin'!